This chapter was interesting because I wanted to display a wide range of emotions. I don't know how well I did because few people comment on subjects as how it made them feel. I have written some stories that people have gotten angry about but for reasons out side of the context of the story line.

This one I plan to continue to emphasize emotions between characters as well as the way they are dealing with their own internal struggles. There is also funny rhetoric along the way and some passionate moments.

I'm trying to keep the word count on each count between 5~8k so I think well end up with about 40 chapters total when all is said and done. So it looks like 6 more. I look forward to writing the end that I have played out so many times in my mind.

These last chapters are very well laid out. I kind of think backwards like that. i take the end and work to the start.